Some good descriptive language used to describe the picture / setting. I really liked the line 'the tall, skinny tree points towards the sky' and the tree looks like big giants stuck in the ground'. Could you have used a metaphor and personification to combine this description? For example: Tall, skinny giants reach to the sky, basking in the sun Good start, well done Mrs T
Some good descriptive language used to describe the picture / setting. I really liked the line 'the tall, skinny tree points towards the sky' and the tree looks like big giants stuck in the ground'.
ReplyDeleteCould you have used a metaphor and personification to combine this description?
For example:
Tall, skinny giants reach to the sky, basking in the sun
Good start, well done
Mrs T